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Thursday, October 13, 2011

mood and setting

I ran in the cold heavy snow lost in the strange woods. My heart pounding fast every second. Hearing the whispers of the frightening woods. As I gaze trough the white snow I spot a tiny cabin. The cabin was as if it was a haunted house.

6 comments:

  1. Alex,
    My name is Angela Pitts, and I am a student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I enjoyed reading your post. You used many descriptive words to paint a picture of your journey through the forest.

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  2. Great use of juicy words for details. I love it. I can close my eyes and it's almost as if I can see a movie. Astounding job! Keep Blogging

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  3. That is Very good i felt like i was actually there while i was reading.

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  4. I like the way you described how you were feeling and said "Hearing the Whispers". Did you just think of this on the spot or did it take you a while to think of?

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  5. good mood and setting but you spelled through wrong.

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  6. The setting is very good it pus me in the mood for the story from Saul

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